Who Chose?
Who chose the colors of the sky
or the trees and rocks
Who sat there and thought
green would look good
against the blue
Maybe white for the clouds
That had to be tough
the water was already blue
Clouds are water
but they're white
or dark grey
Where did the blue go
when the water stopped
being a lake?
c. 2012 C. Thames
I was looking at a small lake, then at the clouds, then back at the lake, and that one hit me. I was following up on the Who idea for the next one.
Who Asks?
Who asks the water
to stop being a river
and start being a cloud
Do the drops get together
and decide
We're out of here!
Or, do the ones in the sky
invite the rest
Come on up for a party
Hang for a while
go home later
It's a cool deal
hanging in a cloud
Circle the world
then rain on a flower
Getting flushed can't be fun
but it's gone
back home.
c. 2012 C. Thames
Who asks the water
to stop being a river
and start being a cloud
Do the drops get together
and decide
We're out of here!
Or, do the ones in the sky
invite the rest
Come on up for a party
Hang for a while
go home later
It's a cool deal
hanging in a cloud
Circle the world
then rain on a flower
Getting flushed can't be fun
but it's gone
back home.
c. 2012 C. Thames
I don't know that I like the second one that much. It feels like it kind of falls apart in the last stanza. I've been thinking about cycles lately, and both of these kind of represent that, in their own way. Different ideas, different ways of looking at things. All that. Maybe that's the point of poetry? Present a new way of looking at things? I don't know. It is kind of fun, though.
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