I haven't been here in a bit, but that's okay. I would rather do that than blather some nonsense every day. I've been reading poetry, mostly. I found a book by David Berman, "Actual Air" that has a lot of good lines in it. I mentioned before that I really like good lines, and this one has a bunch of them. It was a really good exercise, because after a bit I realized that the good lines where the best part of the poetry. The rest left something. I wish I knew what it was. With Mark Strand, the good lines are in service of the poem. For David, not so much. The good lines in his book were almost self-congratulatory. I liked his stuff, but not as much as Mark's.
Then I started reading X=, by Stephen Berg. I picked it up at the library and flipped through it, thinking it was pretty readable. After I got into it a bit, I realized that every line of every poem in the book starts with "he". For some reason, that really put me off. I couldn't read the rest of the book once I realized that. I wonder what he got from referring to the third person like that? I think part of the reason it put me off was that I lived in a dissociated state until I was 29. I never referred to myself in the first person. It was always in the third person. Nothing every happened to me, it happened to "him." Oh well. No poems this time. I have a couple I'm working on, but they're not ready yet. I hope all of you have a good New Years, and that the coming year is better than the last one.
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